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Mar
23rd
2005

Just another star ?

Posted in : Poetic rants

The soft caress of a lovers touch
over every inch of your skin
each nerve alight for that brush
burning from the joy within

Passions awaking like fire
body totally ablaze
oblivious to all of the others
held raptuously in that gaze

Clouds parting from your face
the glow of your love, set free
I realise that you're there for everything
but I also know you shine for just me

Ripping clothes from my body hastily
baring my skin to your touch
the heat of the moment my obsession
you'll be gone before I have to much

All to soon the moment has faded
and the clouds rain down in my heart
I stare upwards vainly at heaven
wishing the clouds would part

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Replied on : 03/23/05 @ 03:40 am #1

oh wow!

this amazing...
 
 
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Replied on : 03/23/05 @ 12:49 pm #2

Gotta love our nearest star ;)

I may have opened the door, but you entered of your own free will

 
 

Replied on : 07/19/06 @ 10:44 am #3

Another memorable peek into that amazing mind of yours. Funny how some poems never fail to touch no matter how many times you read them. This is one of those.

Love the double entendre you used...it makes this piece a true classic from you, Sunshine... you are MY favorite star! *wink* Keep sharing those rays of light!

*hugs*
 
 
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Replied on : 07/20/06 @ 10:52 am #4

lol, it's a dark and cracked place sometimes ;)

You always put a smile on my face :D

((((((Desiree))))

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I may have opened the door, but you entered of your own free will

 
 

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